Reflection

My paper had both strengths and weaknesses. A few weaknesses were my thesis statement, the clarity of sentences and telling my stories. I have always struggled with thesis statements but the workshop helped a lot. I figured if I let my class break it apart it would be easier for me to develop it on my own time. Everyone was afraid to do it so I did. It helped me understand what I did wrong. My sentences sometimes sound like I'm babbling on paper. Everything always makes sense in my head but then when I put it on paper it doesn't make any sense. Once I read it over I can sometimes catch my mistakes and fix them. When I tell stories in my essays I expect people to know what I know. I forget that I'm telling a story for a reason. Then when I remember that I need to give some extra details I give too much. Besides weaknesses my paper has many strengths. When ever I analyze something I do a great job. I great with details when it comes to analyzing things. I describe the situations in paper very well.

I did not really enjoy peer review at all. It was some what helpful but not really. Only two people were helpful when giving me feedback. My group was helpful with my thesis statement.